User talk:Lawren.guthrie/sandbox

=Peer Review= 1. The background that you included about the garlic bread meme is very well organized and thought out. You also have some really great sources.

2. In your lead, I feel like the word meme is used a few too many times, it gets a little repetitive. There may be no other way to word it and this is fine, just something to look into if you have the time.

3. Overall this is a good foundation for an article. The only thing I would change is to maybe add a little be more background to the history of the meme when talking about the girl and her grandmother on Facebook.

4. I really like the section about controversies! It helped me realize that I should also include that section in my article. Hazelwoodb (talk) 16:21, 20 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review 2
1. I see a few general grammar issues that are easily resolved; one thing you might do is copy/paste your article to Grammarly, and it should help to catch the minor issues without having to pay for a membership :)

2. Is there more information about the incident on Facebook? If so, it might be a good idea to add more background.

3. You use the word 'meme' quite a bit; if possible, you might consider using a different word/phrasing your text differently in order to cut down on repetition.

Overall a good start for your article! The controversies section was a good thing to add; it's always good to provide info about such topics. Good job! Treasure lynn98 (talk) 16:23, 23 April 2018 (UTC)Treasure lynn98