User talk:Lawrencebimi

Your submission at Articles for creation: Detroit Health Department (March 20)
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SwisterTwister  talk  06:13, 20 March 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Detroit Health Department (April 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tvx1 was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Tvx1 23:11, 15 April 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Detroit Health Department has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Detroit Health Department. Thanks! Worldbruce (talk) 18:25, 18 April 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Detroit Health Department has been accepted
 Detroit Health Department, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as B-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! LaMona (talk) 21:50, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
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