User talk:Lawson.329

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (September 15)
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MatthewVanitas (talk) 16:37, 15 September 2014 (UTC)

Maratus volans
Thank you for your additions to the Maratus volans article. I noticed that while you included references to specific sources (Thornhill 1984, Girard 2011, etc.) you do not appear to have included the actual references. Without including some pointer to the actual source, it's very difficult to locate the sources you're actual speaking of. In addition, it's much better to use tags, since these can keep the entire citation together (especially if you use the citation tool that's available in the tool bar at the top of the edit window.

In addition to this, the last few sentences in your second and third paragraphs lack citations. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:56, 20 November 2014 (UTC)

Your draft article, User:Lawson.329/sandbox


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 17:42, 27 May 2015 (UTC)