User talk:Laxanan

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Zaigham's peer review for Bedrock
The lead section for this article is very dry and not really helpful. It explains very briefly what bedrock is but doesn't really provide any more information and is not very helpful. More information on the types of bedrock or what occurs during weathering for example are things that should be included in this section. The structure of this article is hard to address as this article is very bare. There is only one heading labelled "In soil science" and this section has almost nothing in it. To make this article good, lots more information should be added to this section and more headings should be provided. The coverage with what is provided is fairly balanced. However more information on the soil science section would greatly add to the article. The content is neutral as there are no clashing opinions seen. Sources are well dated and are reliable as they are seen to be from peer-reviewed articles.

Overall, the article is still bare and in the early stages of editing but once the considerations above are addressed and more information is put into the article, then the article will be good.

Zaighamalavi (talk) 19:03, 18 February 2019 (UTC)Zaigham Alavi