User talk:Laylaelq/sandbox

Peer review
Dear Layla,

I think you have a really strong start to your edits and have clearly thought through your process. I think you have a really solid plan in terms of copyediting and adding new sources. I also think it is really amazing that you are working to translate the English page into Portuguese. since it is going to be hard for me to check on your translations ill give my PR based on the work you've done in English.

It would be really interesting if you further flushed out the concept you brought up surrounding her relationship with Judaism. That would be a great area to offer more resources and provide more citations since it seems the wiki page does not have a ton about it currently. I thought your final paragraph's edits were the strongest in terms of making it more concise and strong. but you cut several sentences that were weaker regarding film and it could be a good area to expand in a more concrete and cited manner than what was previously there. Additionally, in the publications section, you mention "various book" but don't offer an explanation of what they. it could be a good section to go through and find titles and dates and offer a little more about some of her bigger works (not just the list that is currently other this section) instead of focusing on the impact of publications. I think the section as you mention in your notes that likely needs the most re-wording is the reception page because it does little to capture her impact and it structurally offers little. It also would likely be worth your time to see if there are pieces which discuss some of the modern appreciation of her work since most of the reception section focuses on critiques. All that being said in terms of impact om the page and accessibility translating the page will likely serve the best purpose. but I think it is important for you to understand where the page could be improved. I think its good to continue to make small notes on the pages you are working on and copyedit as you translate. Additionally, perhaps trying to get other copyedits made by the rest of your group to translate so that both language pages are the best they can be.