User talk:Lbaumgartner928/sandbox

Hi Libby! Do you plan on adding info about Shakespeare's views on virginity? Or just sticking with the idea of discussing different religions? If you do use that source you have linked, make sure it is a secondary source and not your own interpretation of his quotes. I think it would be very beneficial to the virginity page for you to add info on different religions! Adding different perspectives should help with that ethnocentrism issue. Glad you noticed that ethnocentrism and want to fix it! Adding additional photos is a good idea as well, I didn't even think about the importance of photos on an article. Is there a specific religion you are going to focus on editing? Or do you plan on adding a new one? I will review your draft when you add more info.- Bridgetclu (talk) 19:37, 14 October 2016 (UTC)