User talk:Lbmchenry/sandbox

Elena Kagan's page: 1. There are multiple direct quotes throughout the page that I would like to turn into more paraphrased pieces: Ex: "She had strong opinions about what a bat mitzvah should be like, which didn't parallel the wishes of the rabbi," her father's colleague said. I would change into: "A colleague of Kagan's father even remarked on her strong will and opinions about the way she wanted her bat mitzvah which was in contrast to how the rabbi wanted it." or something in that effect. 2. Under the heading "Return To Academia," I'd like to add in that she was the first female dean of Harvard Law School