User talk:Lchtnst2/sandbox

Group 5
Review #1

I like how no parts in the chembox are repeated in the actual article. The information included in the article is also relevant. Some things that I think you could add are: an equation for the synthesis of the compound, a picture of the compound, and an introduction at the top of the article. You might also want to cite your sources using MLA, APA, etc. Also, the page might look nicer if the chembox wasn't so wide.

Ewu7 (talk) 13:26, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

Review #2 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ksklwsk2 (talk • contribs) 16:58, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

I think that you did a good job with the various article sections. They seem informational and are properly cited.I think that you could use a reaction shown directly in the synthesis section.I really like your history section and medical uses section. I see that you have a link but a clear chemical reaction either an equation or a snapshot of one in marvinsketch or jmol would be better. Your chem box is also filled nicely, except for the chemical picture dimensions. It'd look a lot more clean cut if the dimensions were smaller.

Ksklwsk2 (talk) 16:45, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

Review #3

Great job on overall sections. The only thing I would strongly suggest is narrowing the chembox because it is a little bit too wide. It would be nice if you implement a 3-D picture of the molecule in the chembox like one in Vobasan page. Synthesis is really clear and neat. History part is pretty decent and solid. Also, you might want to have few sentences describing the characteristics of the molecule, including color and odor.

Schen77 (talk) 11:35, 3 November 2012 (UTC)

Review #4

Good job at finding any relevant information at all for this chemical. My biggest concern lies in the ChemBox. Your image does not match the image on ChemSpider (in one of the rings, you have an hydroxyl group where ChemSpider has a methoxy). It would be nice to show any relevant stereochemistry especially around the two hydroxyl groups not on the aromatic rings. In your synthesis section, some mechanism in the synthesis of this compound or list some of the major reagents used in the synthesis.

Agsilverman47 (talk) 11:30, 4 November 2012 (UTC)