User talk:Lcwest/Education reform/Whodatmom Peer Review

Thank you for the feedback about the lede section. I agree with your comment that the live articles lede was overwhelming and that some of the content was not reflected in the subsections of the article. I made some edits. When you have a chance, i would appreciate it if you would take another look at the live page and see if you think it better. :) thank you

Lcwest (talk)

Not sure if I am supposed to respond here. So I apologize if not. I do like the way it looks now. That little bit of change makes it easier on the eyes and allows the information to be better organized. I can step away from the article and bookmark where I left off now that the article has sub-headings.Whodatmom (talk) 22:22, 2 May 2021 (UTC)