User talk:Ldc30507/Chen Duxiu/Yanjun-Liu3 Peer Review

Yanjun-Liu3 (talk) 16:37, 24 October 2020 (UTC)I think your paragraphs have good subheadings that have a strong relationship with the content. But I think your subheadings could be more logical, of course, this is just my suggestion. Beyond that, maybe it's because you're not writing much yet, so there's only one source. Next, you may need to add more reliable sources to make your posts more complete.