User talk:Ldoucetmyseneca

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Hello, Ldoucetmyseneca, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hi! I love the use of the image in the article - that looks great! My main concerns now center around the writing style - the writing is a little choppy, so it needs to be edited for flow. Also, make sure that you attribute any claims or theories to the persons or institutions making them, so they don't come across as personal observations. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:09, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Hey Shalor,

I will begin to work on this, as I am in the middle of finals, I will implement as soon as I can.