User talk:LeahWodajo1/Polyembryony

Hi Leah, it's Emily and here's my feedback:


 * I noticed you added two references, but I don't see the content it goes with.
 * Also, the article you chose needs a picture or diagram or two, because it's good to be able to have visuals of concepts.
 * The lead section needs a longer definition, since it should be able to refer to things in the body of the article.
 * In the vertebrates section, add a part about the phenomenon in humans, since it's mentioned in the lead section and it would be good to mention it, since only having an application of polyembryony in armadillos doesn't demonstrate the phenomenon well. Add at least two more species that this occurs in so readers can get a good idea of how it can happen.
 * You should also add more terms to the see also section - it can include topics/terms that were mentioned but don't need to be explained in great detail, so if a reader wants to know about it, they can go to that page.
 * You haven't really added anything, but I gave you some starting points.

- Emily

Starwarsfan6 (talk) 16:55, 11 March 2022 (UTC)