User talk:Leahyaa/Slendertail lanternshark/Gracegjerde Peer Review

Peer review of Slendertail lanternshark hormonal control on bioluminescence
Overall Impression:

Increased the quality of the article and made it more complete by adding a thorough explanation of the hormonal control of the slendertail lanternshark's bioluminescence

Strengths:

Added 4 peer-reviewed references, which contributes to quality and reliability of page

Very thorough explanation of hormonal control on the organism's bioluminescence, also the links to the scientific terminology is helpful...also used relatively recent articles and the information of the mechanism was complete given the current literature

Improvements:

You could add a subsection "hormonal control" to the bioluminescence section to organize the section better. Having one large block of text can sometimes hinder people from reading the whole section. If you identify key aspects of the bioluminescence with section headers, I think that readers would be able to easily find the information they are looking for Gracegjerde (talk) 16:50, 28 March 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you I will be sure to add those changes! Daynafreeman (talk) 01:16, 31 March 2023 (UTC)Daynafreeman