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Jocelyn's Peer Review
Articles

"Sustainable financing for ocean and coastal management in Jamaica: The potential for revenues from tourist user fees" - This is a good source that is available on the library's one search and is peer reviewed

The Paragraph

- The first paragraph is slightly persuasive and should take a more neutral approach when approaching this subject. Instead of saying "If their oceans are not functioning at their best then the well-being of Jamaica and the people who live there will start to deteriorate." take a more neutral approach and state the effects of polluted oceans on Jamaica and the wild life surrounding Jamaica

- The opening statement also seems to be more on the persuasive side and vague and does not have to do with the environmental aspects surrounding Jamaica

- Explains how marine life is affected by tourists and that Jamaica needs tourism for its economy which helps manage the marine eco system. This causes a causal relationship between the protection of the marine eco system and the funds that come from tourists that impact the marine ecosystem. In which tourists come and impact the marine life and in turn the government then uses some of those funds received from tourists in order to manage the marine system that the tourists impacted in the first place.