User talk:Leavitt210/sandbox

Peer Review (Zhao)
I really like your information table with compound structure images. While most of the basic information and properties are already in your table, I took a look at some other wikipedia articles about organic compounds, and it seems worth to have a descriptive paragraph to introduce more about the structure and properties of Dichloran.

I think you can expand Uses with more information, maybe include what kind of fungal infections it is used to treat?

Under subtitle Effects and health issues, it would be nice if you separate the content to several paragraphs, and since you didn’t cite anything, it may worth adding a few references. Also, “2,6-Dichloro-4-nitroaniline” can probably be replaced by just “Dichloran” to make this section easier to follow.

At the end of your article, I think you can link to some other related wikipedia articles like Index of pesticide articles or List of fungicides.

Aiyosa523 (talk) 01:37, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Peer Review
This is a topic that honestly catches me off balance and do not really know what more can be said about pesticides. Maybe what could be a replacement for it, or in which specific cases it is used and give some brief description about them. Maybe citing an article on this topic and discussing it may be helpful. I found the following article: Dichloran as an Inhibitor of Mold Spreading in Fungal Plating Media: Effects on Colony diameter and Enumeration by Eldon Henson

The article has a good flow with good sentences length and no apparent grammar mistakes. Casadolcecasa (talk) 15:41, 10 April 2015 (UTC)Mahmoud Idriss