User talk:Ledwards87/sandbox

Hi Laura!

You've made some impressive additions to this article so far! It's clear where you've expanded on the existing information in these sections, and I can see why you made the re-organizational choices you did here.

My biggest suggestions after review your changes are: --be careful to cite sources when stating information as fact (for example, that the earliest wholecloth quilts in the US date to the 1660's) --as you finalize your work on this article, take a close look at making your voice consistent with the voice of the existing article pieces and give it a careful proofread

I hope this helps a little as you continue working on the article, and I look forward to seeing the other changes you make to it! Nicoleccc (talk) 21:28, 27 July 2018 (UTC)