User talk:Lee.yuji/sandbox

With the development of the electronic technology, people are addicted to smartphone become a daily topic. Adding more relevant pictures and references will make the topic more completed

Suggestion on the Edit
Hi YUji, I suggest that you add content list, 3 imagines before class tomorrow and also make the intro super short!(Maybe just leave the first line as the Intro?) In case that you just adding sections on articles, I guess don't worry about it just add some images and sources to back the argument is fine.It certainly looks like a lot of citation is needed for now. Good job on the content! I can totally tell you have the structure out already.--Kaitlyntian (talk) 18:23, 19 October 2019 (UTC)