User talk:Leeds.bois.114/sandbox

Ready! Your additions to the existing page on Mehta strengthen and add depth. You have done a great job of utilizing the sources you found for this project and condensing the pertinent information into a prose style consistent with what Wikipedia expects. Careful rereading and editing will strengthen your work before you are ready to post the final draft.

Batcow39 (talk) 16:47, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

Student review:

A really good article all I did was a few minor fixes to sentence structure and wording. There are a few run-on sentences that could easily be split in two for the sake of clarity, but overall the writing is really strong. I noticed you mentioned the controversy for her film Fire and how Water was halted because of protest - you could maybe add a section called "controversies" and put all of these events together in one section, I think that would be really interesting. Mossadeghx (talk) 23:27, 22 February 2018 (UTC)