User talk:LeenMb

Welcome!
Hello, LeenMb, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Your article
I returned your article to your sandbox because it isn't ready for mainspace yet.

One of the main issues is that you have no inline citations, which makes it difficult for readers to verify factual statements in your article. Every statement should be followed by a supporting citation; if a group of sentences are all supported by the same source, you can place a single reference after all of them, but you need to have at least one reference per paragraph, and you shouldn't have any statements after the final reference in a paragraph. If you need a refresher on how to add citations, please consult this training module.

The second issue is the sources you're using. I don't believe that any of them meet Wikipedia's sourcing requirements. The first is a WordPress site. It appears to have been connected with a class, but there doesn't appear to be any information about who created it, or why they should be treated as an expert. The second source seems to be a personal website with no "About" information. The third is an unpublished essay (as best I can tell), while the fourth is a testing site.

You need to find reliable sources. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:51, 25 April 2022 (UTC)