User talk:Lehn02120/sandbox

testAmyc29 (talk) 15:57, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Peer review
I would suggest giving an explanation of what PFAs are at the beginning instead of starting off with the timeline. Also give more examples of PFAs on top of ScotchGard. The main talking points give a good idea of what it's going to look like, and I liked how you have it structured. Good start but I'd say once you get all the bullet points done it would be more comprehensive. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Munzerrabah (talk • contribs) 16:17, 22 October 2021 (UTC)

Peer Review: Yea definitely agree with the suggestions above, when I first read it, I had no idea what PFAs are. Maybe define who are the 3M. You can actually link these terms to another Wikipedia page so you don't have to define each definition. Your work is organized with subtopics so I will definitely use that as a guide for my Wikipedia page--Nyh65 (talk) 16:37, 22 October 2021 (UTC) Ny