User talk:Lellas A

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Oh dear
Almost a year later, and I have no idea if you'll ever see this. Well, I'll try anyway.

First: the article you submitted: a story which was shortlisted for a major award. That's entirely a valid subject. No worries there.

Second: the references you submitted: no, no, no, no, no. Some of those are unacceptable, and the rest will have to be completely redone. You're citing random people's blogs, with no particular reason as to why this or that blog should be considered as a source. And even for the indisputably legit sources, you're just saying "web page". This is what URLs are for. You have to actually link to them.

sigh

Let's see how well I can fix this. Gonna have to chop out a lot of your analysis, since it's not cited to any proper sources. DS (talk) 15:09, 26 February 2017 (UTC)