User talk:LemonadeJade

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Hello, LemonadeJade, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Cancer in dogs review
Hi LemonadeJade,

I really enjoyed reading your article on cancer in dogs. I found it interesting and relatable to what most people know about cancer in humans. The way in which you structured the article is coherent and flows somewhat chronologically, from explaining what it is, to symptoms and treatments. One suggestion I have is that maybe you add a little more to the susceptibility section (if that is at all possible) so that the information is more evenly portrayed compared to the other sections. Also, you may wish to add more links to other wiki pages. I found myself in particular wanting to know what a neoplasm was and wishing there was a link I could click to take me to a page on that, which I did see that Wikipedia has one for.

Overall I think it was a job well done for your first wiki article! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sunday Seeker (talk • contribs) 05:41, 30 November 2016 (UTC)