User talk:Lenisa Castaneda/Olduvai Hominid 9

Alexander Martinez's Peer Review on Sandbox talk page
Hello Lenisa, I really enjoyed reading your draft for the OH 9. I found your paper to be really well-written and clear. Some rooms for improvement are to not use the second-person, separate your paragraphs into distinct sections, check for grammatical errors as there were some. However, I really thought that you went into good detail about the topic and your sources were really great for the project. Again great job Lenisa. Alexmkid3 (talk) 21:46, 14 May 2020 (UTC)