User talk:Leonek689/sandbox

hello Duenask638 (talk) 16:34, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review by Kathryn Duenas
- make your reference section. make sure that you add the citations to the sentences first and the references will then automatically create a list. - go over your work and make sure to paraphrase in your own words. - clear out the work that you don't want to add. go over the work you've added a few times and make sure it is not cluttered. - if you want to omit the Wii section, go ahead. But I think it could be beneficial to keep in if you include the information that is worth reading about. I wouldn't overwhelm yourself with the source that the information came from since it seems to be a bit messy with all of the other sources piled into it. Take what you want from it and go from there. - if you do decide to keep the Wii section in, add a few pictures if possible. I saw that they already have a picture of the balance board. I guess you could add pictures of the remotes, only if that helps get the point across. - Also add more pictures of anything else that might help emphasize. I'm not sure how you can incorporate pictures of the app (or if that is even possible with copyright) but I think that it would be a good idea to see a bit of how the app works visually. Overall you are doing really, really well. Don't worry about the length of the information you have, it's more than enough! Email: duenask638@dupage.edu Duenask638 (talk) 17:17, 26 April 2018 (UTC)