User talk:Leosibb4

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Hello, Leosibb4, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Use of first-person perspective
Hi, In the edit you made to the United States Citizenship and Immigration Services article on 25 May, you inserted a line containing "Finally, we have Customs and Border Protection (CBP) ...". Please bear in mind that using the first-person perspective in this manner is strongly discouraged in Wikipedia articles. You can find out more about this policy at WP:NARRATOR.

Your edit also added material that contained numerous typographical errors (in particular, missing punctuation and capitalisation) and that appeared to be excessively detailed and out-of-place within the article. On these grounds I have reversed your changes. XAM2175 (T) 00:13, 27 May 2022 (UTC)