User talk:Leoyssanel13/Rudolph Fisher

Hello,

I am copying and pasting this peer review comment I left on Angelina.deltoro 's talk page.

Wow, this article is very well-done! It was very well organized and full of detailed, valuable information. Although the article is very expansive and covers so many parts of Rudolph Fisher's life, I think it would be beneficial to expand on his early life some more. That section is very bare in comparison to the other sections. Some details about his childhood would be very interesting to read about. Also, the same could be said for the section on Pan-Africanism. Other than expanding in those two areas, I felt as though the article flowed beautifully and it is obvious that extensive research was put into this page. Great job.

Morganjones1 (talk) 01:37, 19 November 2020 (UTC)Morganjones1