User talk:Lesli2013

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Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Bruce Pittman
I am about ready to accept your submission Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Bruce Pittman but it needs some major cleanup of the formatting from the "personal life" section on down. Section titles should almost always have == before AND after the section title, and sub-sections should have === before and after the sub-section title. Large blocks of quotes should be replaced with summaries or much shorter snippets, with a reference provided to lead people to the original quote. Please post a note on user talk:davidwr when you have completed the cleanup and I'll give it what I hope is a final once-over then move it. davidwr/ (talk)/(contribs)/(e-mail)  02:36, 22 April 2013 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Bruce Pittman, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! davidwr/ (talk)/(contribs)/(e-mail)  00:08, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
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 * I had to replace almost all of your submission as it was very promotional and had too much information about various films and television shows. The article is about the person, not his works.  Sadly, I even had to remove the bit about his starting a theater in 1972 because I could not find a reliable, secondary source like a newspaper from 1972 to back it up.  Mr. Pittman's International Movie Database entry is not suitable for most uses because it was written by him and is therefore considered a primary rather than secondary source.  I do want to personally thank you for bringing this person to Wikipedia's attention.  The encyclopedia is more complete now than it was without an entry about him. davidwr/  (talk)/(contribs)/(e-mail)  00:17, 28 April 2013 (UTC)