User talk:Lestermaupoy1/New sandbox

Peer Review: Chidera Obiwuma
Your addition is very intresting and your writing is very fluid and has good language control. There are just some minor grammatical and space errors that I would like to point out to watch for. I like how you used many examples throughout history to push your argument forward. An addition that I would suggest to show the impact of media and propaganda is one of the biggest propaganda movements in history which was China's shift towards Communism especially under the rule of Chairman Mao. I also think it would be interesting to look at it from another contemporary example especially with the current presidential situation in the United States and how the things that he has said and propagated have cause harm to many racial and ethnic groups. Also look at the effects that it has on his supporters, and how they now feel empowered to express the hatred that they so feared to display previously and how that has created an increase in racial and ethnic altercations and bigotry as a result.