User talk:Leuwit

Leuwit, welcome to Wikipedia. Your edits to Koretoshi Maruyama include one no-no and one thing of concern. The no-no is changing spellings which are not actually wrong but may reflect dialectal or conventional differences (as between US and UK). "Travelling" with two Ls is common in the US. The thing of concern was inserting the word "there", which makes it unambiguous that he trained first at Keio. Do you know this to be true? If not, then it should be left ambiguous whether he trained first at Keio or at Hombu. And if you know it to be true, it's best (although not mandatory) if you can provide a reference to the literature. If you have personal knowledge of Maruyama Sensei, I hope you'll continue to improve the article, or those of other teachers you know. Djiann (talk) 04:33, 20 February 2008 (UTC)
 * It just dawned on me that because you added the year, you probably know this as a fact. It would be interesting to note who his teacher was at the time. Djiann (talk) 04:36, 20 February 2008 (UTC)