User talk:Levifbaby/sandbox

Hey Jade,

I've made edits according to your review. I was able to find the original source of the image associated with the unedited article, but it is not appropriately licensed so it will be removed from the published article. Let me know if you think there are more edits I should make.

Thanks

Levifbaby (talk) 23:04, 21 November 2020 (UTC) -- Hi! So I think you added some really great information to this article. I actually was initially going to edit this article myself as I thought it sounded interesting. In the second paragraph, you talk about IGS INcRNA's and how when they are expressed, they create the detention center. However, I think maybe you need to mention briefly how exactly they do this? Does their expression create the structural parts of the detention center or what exactly do they change to form the detention center? Also, when I was critiquing this article before I changed mine, I noticed that the photos added are cited under the person who created or edited the article when that's not correct; worth looking into and trying to find the correct owner! Overall, your citations look good and the flow of it all and the structure seems good. SunflowerSkies (talk) 22:34, 4 November 2020 (UTC)