User talk:Lexiholroyd/new sandbox

Peer Review:

I think this a very interesting topic. A little more information can be added to each section. In the intro, maybe adding an example of it being used in nuclear medicinal diagnostic techniques would paint the picture to the reader as to how it helps and why its important. Adding an image, if you can, as to what MIBG looks like in the intro would capture the readers attention also. For the mechanism section you can explain in more detail how it is absorbed by and accumulated in granules of adrenal medullary chromaffin cells. The information given in the imaging procedures is well written. If possible adding more detail on the procedure would strengthen this section even more. Overall this draft is a great start on talking about MIBG. Looking forward to reading the article after you are done editing it.