User talk:LexusBailey/Hilal Al-Ahmadi

Critique
Big issue now is notability. Why is he important enough to be in an encyclopedia? Here is an article might help you put this into perspective and state the significance: [newswatch]. In particular, look at the reactions and the last two paragraphs. Most of the reporters in Iraq killed since 2003 died from war-related death. For Al-Ahmadi, this was not the case. Can you find information on the CPJ.org site that backs that up? (Search Iraq, killed since 1992) There is information that needs backed up, such as lines marked with "citation needed". You should use inline citation.

Work on the lead! // Why is this journalist important? //  Use inline citations.

You're almost done!Crtew (talk) 05:18, 27 October 2011 (UTC)