User talk:Lfarrugia10

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Hello, Lfarrugia10, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Brianda and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Jamila Norman - feedback
Hi @Lfarrugia10, Thanks for your contribution in creating the article on Jamila Norman! I looked over the article and have some feedback to improve it.

Lead sentence: The lead section should be less of an introduction and more of a succinct summary of the article. Your opening sentence needs to tell your readers, as directly as possible, what the topic of the article is. Ex: "Jamila Norman is an American -insert occupation or field of work title here- ..." The remainder of the lead should summarize all the major points of the article in a paragraph or two.

Punctuation: In keeping with Wikipedia's style guide - references go after punctuation, not before, and there isn't supposed to be a space between them. Look over the text to fix these errors.

If you have any questions feel free to reach out. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:42, 17 April 2023 (UTC)