User talk:Lfmaynor1

Additional editing to the definition was made so that the information was easy to read and understand in the chain of information provided before editing. I used scholarly sources (Reference #6 and #12) to provide recent information and facts regarding Johnson and Johnson baby powder products and the findings of the medical issues involved with this companies products. I added the additional tab "Ethical and Business Issues" regarding baby powder because the audience needs to be aware of the ongoing lawsuits and the uprising of issues with the J&J company. I feel this should be applicable in defining what baby powder is due to the issues involving the ingredients, being as they only changed their ingredients in the year 2020. I also fixed the page to look more professional with editing the headers to the paragraphs, and also adding one at the top where the main definition is for baby powder. There were some grammatical errors that I fixed. The wording needed to be fixed as well, as it did not flow well.