User talk:Lfreeman04/sandbox

I personally have never herd of this, your intro really gave a lot of info. As far as symptoms, are those the only symptoms or is there more? I feel like that area is a little empty. The picture was nice thing to have.

--Imunoz02 (talk) 01:43, 16 November 2019 (UTC)

Super cool! It looks great and I think the pictures are really helpful. I would add a section title labeled "abstract" at the beginning to go above your abstract just to be clear. I'm not sure if there are any but if there are any abnormal symptoms other than the ones listed I think that could be helpful to include. It looks great overall! Good work. --Rworley02 (talk) 02:01, 16 November 2019 (UTC)

Right now, almost nothing has been added to the original article, and, in fact, some material has been taken out. So little has changed that I do not feel like I can helpfully comment. At this point, this would not receive a passing grade. --Sweiner02 (talk) 18:37, 30 November 2019 (UTC)