User talk:Lggalang7

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Lamuel Galang Peer Review
Lamuel Galang Peer Review The outline of the article seems very straight forward so far and contains numerous interesting genealogy of the topic. The topics seems really relevant and gives readers an insight of the overall intention of the article. I do think that there should be more companies that should be mentioned instead of putting them under the umbrella of "Other companies". The points that are made in the article seems neutral, as it seems like it is summarizing the actual conclusion of specific events. I do want to see if there are more political aspects towards this topic, such as what are the outcomes of specific events and how were they handled by the government.

Lamuel, Lggalang7 (talk) 22:58, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Lamuel Galang Peer Review
Lamuel Galang Peer Review, I think the organization of the article could be improved by starting with the history instead of the lead. I think that giving people a concise introduction gives people a more throughout insight information about the article. The topics along the article seems really interesting and seems that they are connected with the overall broader topic. In addition, I think it would be interested to see if there is some certain hierarchy between the people who work in the agriculture and the land owners who owns them. I am interested to see if the article can dive into economic things into the article and how can certain events can affect certain people in Gambia.