User talk:Lgt1500/Abortion in Kenya

1. Very neutral work, straight to the problem with abortion in Kenya and its constitutional implications. I think this is very well researched. I can easily tell where the issue is and feel informed about contemporary issues. 2. I don't really know the history of abortion in Kenya, only its more recent problems. Possibly a small addition detailing the prevailing sentiment of abortion in Kenya over time could really compliment the page. More citations, even if used before. I could not tell if the citation following the phrase referred to it as well. 3. Honestly, the gaps and lack of citations are the only jarring things. Combined with the existing work, I anticipate a well researched and thorough wiki page on abortion in Kenya.

It is very clear that this is well thought out work. Additionally, I thought the structure flowed well, which made the topic clear and easy to follow. You made many notes of what you are planning to contribute already so I don't know what gaps in research you really have, but adding a little historical context will be useful in explaining the overall issue. Your sources are also reputable which adds assurance to the quality of information on your page so just adding a few more would be good as well. Overall, I think you have a very good page thus far and with more information it will be well done. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fallof00 (talk • contribs) 22:48, 30 October 2020 (UTC)

1. When you mention the Constitution, immediately mentioning the reaction from Christian groups might set a non-neutral tone so you might want to delay discussion of opinions on the issue. 2. Very good use of primary sources and citations. 3. In your subheading, you say "post abortion", but then say "post-abortion" in the text. 4. I like the context that you use. Maybe a quick summary of the opinions on the issues from both sides would be beneficial as well. -Frankie Sheehy — Preceding unsigned comment added by Frankiesheehy (talk • contribs) 21:38, 6 November 2020 (UTC)