User talk:Lhardy3/Oretha Castle Haley Boulevard

Overall the information stated in your article is great. just to add a little more to your article try to add pictures and more descriptions on where things are located on the street. for example on the corner of.. or near this infamous shop.. just things to give a little more imagery to your article. overall great work!!!

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This is looking very good to begin! Nice work. Your lead is very nicely written and clearly summarizes the current content of the article. Remember, though, that it should not have a heading and should be the very first thing in the article.

The three main sections are well organized. Let's see if we can expand the content, though, by considering additional sources. It's never ideal to have one full paragraph coming from one source. One thing you should consider it to slow down and offer some details about the things you currently mention. For example, this sentence is a good start, but much to brief: "The boulevard is home to several restaurants, the Zeitgeist Multi-Disciplinary Arts Center, the Peoples Health New Orleans Jazz Market, the Southern Food and Beverage Museum." Get some information from another source about the Zeitgeist. Get some information from another source about the Jazz Market. Get some information from another source about the Southern Food and Beverage Museum. That will make for a richer and more meaningful article, while also expanding the content and bringing in additional sources.

Nice work so far! jtodd1973 15:28, 8 March 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jtodd1973 (talk • contribs)