User talk:Lhoy18

Article Evaluation
This article clearly discusses the different aspects and history of Peruvian food. After evaluating the article, it seems as though the authors have done a good job since information was properly cited and all information was very relevant to this topic. However, as I delved deeper into reading and evaluating, I found some aspects that they could improve upon. As far as tone goes, there were no biases apparent and all of the information was very factual. With citations, only a few of the many provided had links that actually worked. It seemed as though many of the articles that were used to form this particular article are now outdated. I did not find any other conversations going on in the Talk page. Overall, this article is very factual and has the right intentions, but needs some updating. Lhoy18 (talk) 21:22, 27 September 2018 (UTC)