User talk:Lhsmith430/sandbox

Good information thus far, information is well organized and well wrote. Maybe check out some of the hyperlinks, not sure on some of them and if they deserve to have a hyperlink52JDH (talk) 16:23, 15 November 2013 (UTC)Joe Hemmelgarn

I thought this section was good. I think it follows Wiki Manual of Style. The language is good. It presents the information clearly to the reader. There is one piece of research/info which is good. Overall I thought this section was pretty good. The only thing I might try to do is find more research. But overall good job. Jacoo3 (talk) 16:34, 15 November 2013 (UTC)