User talk:LiRuiQing/sandbox

someone died; so that's why they need to get this risk assessment. However, sometimes we can not use this to support all of idioctonia.

what idioctonia means ? — Preceding unsigned comment added by AhmadSMC (talk • contribs) 18:33, 26 February 2015 (UTC)

his eight points broke the previous record of seven held by three players,Richard broke the record on February 25, 1945, in a 5–2 victory over Toronto This is a comma splice (talk) 18:25, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

1. It needs some information about the last several year in his career

2. It needs the citation. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xiaoxuxu0313 (talk • contribs) 19:26, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

Richard was also called "the Comet" Makent10 (talk) 20:07, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

he was remarkableMakent10 (talk) 20:12, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

When he was flying his eyes were all lit upMakent10 (talk) 20:20, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

For the first paragraph, it talks about Richard' career. I do not find the grammar and vocabulary mistake. The writing is very good, it also do not have his opinions.

For the second paragraph. No grammar and vocabulary mistake,

For third paragraph, nice too. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.25.221.232 (talk) 19:06, 19 February 2015 (UTC)