User talk:Li Meow

Your submission at Articles for creation: Muslim Go (November 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Robert McClenon (talk) 04:23, 22 November 2016 (UTC)

Draft: Muslim Go
You wrote: "HI Reviewer, Good day to you. Just want to check which sentences or wording that will show advertisement, then i may removed or edit from there. Thank you very much." It appears that you expect that with minor changes to the wording, your draft will be accepted. I do not see any minor changes to to your draft that can get it accepted. The draft as written has serious tone issues and notability issues. It doesn't show notability of the application. If you think that I am being too harsh, you may ask for the advice of other experienced editors at the Teahouse, but I think that they will not be encouraging. They may advise you either not to try to rework and resubmit, or to rewrite the entire draft before resubmitting. I do not see any small changes that can improve it. Robert McClenon (talk) 19:46, 30 November 2016 (UTC)

Also, do you have a connection with the developer of the application? If so, you must declare it in accordance with the conflict of interest guideline. Robert McClenon (talk) 19:46, 30 November 2016 (UTC)