User talk:Liam C O'Callaghan/sandbox

MECH 2960 Instructor Review
I apologize for not having gotten to your review before now. Here are some comments:
 * Your product descriptions make sense, and sound relatively neutral. I'm unsure whether wikipedia will let it stay up or not (only one way to find out!), I'm less knowledgable about their guidelines when it comes to a company like this.
 * For your general material properties section, you have a lot of references, but they're to general materials instead of flex seal materials, right? If so, then make sure that the aspects referenced in the citation and also applicable to flex seal. For instance, for UV absorption, you cite reference 12, but I assume that's just about rubber in general. As such, I don't know if you can make that claim. There are other claims that might be general to rubbers, but not necessarily true of the flex seal material.

UML MECH2960 (talk) 21:48, 13 December 2018 (UTC)