User talk:Libby732/Adiponectin

This is where peer review feedback for Libby732's adiponectin contributions should be posted. Do this by clicking the New section button above. Remember to sign your Wiki username and complete the Canvas quiz to get credit for your peer review work. UWM.AP.Endo (talk) 16:17, 12 November 2020 (UTC)

Aroub Jamal peer review
Peer review questions

Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes, the tone is neutral

Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? Yes, both citations are correct and are appropriate for Wikipedia editing.

Are the citations formatted correctly? yes

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Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? Yes, think the addition of this information is intreating and relevant to the article.

Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? Addition information can be added to expand on the diseases assorted with Adiponectin. The article mentions a few but not much is listed on how those other disease affect Adiponectin.

Aroub Jamal (talk) — Preceding undated comment added 00:12, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

Matthew Wagner peer review
Is the content written in a neutral, unbiased tone? Yes

Do the citations follow the MEDRS (Links to an external site.) (medicine, reliable sources) guidelines? Yes

Are the citations formatted correctly? Yes

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Does it make sense to add this new content to the proposed article? The first sentence is in the Wiki article, it's just phrased differently in the "Function" section. The second sentence is really good to add!! Very interesting information; I am curious to see where you add it.

Are there any other areas of the main article that your classmate could contribute to? This Wiki article does not have much in it; I think you could go wild! I think adding a sections titled "conditions" (or something to that affect) and listing some conditions associated with mutations, high/low levels, conditions that this hormone is related to.

Wagnermr (talk) 01:36, 20 November 2020 (UTC)