User talk:Liberatiam97/sandbox

I really like the changes you're planning to make, I think they're all necessary and well planned. It might help to add sources to the sentences you're changing, although a number of them seem like changes for clarity and precision. If you have time, and if it's possible, you might want to add some more sources in other sections of the article, specifically the one after "Influences". Overall, I think you've done a great job! Joliee19 (talk) 22:42, 26 November 2018 (UTC)