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Sorry for the delay in getting back to you.

Your draft looks pretty good to me, except for the "Results" section which lacks sources and seems a little out of place in an encyclopedia article. Other than that, I noticed that you had a sentence after the final reference in a few of your other paragraphs. You shouldn't have information after the final reference, because it isn't clear to the reader what source supported that final statement. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:02, 18 March 2020 (UTC)


 * Thank you! I removed the Results section (better suited to articles about particular experiments anyway) and improved the citations. I have published the changes on the B-factory page. Libraryisme (talk) 22:32, 23 March 2020 (UTC)