User talk:Lichtreich/sandbox

Dear members of English Wikipedia, Here is a new suggestion/version of the article. I work for German Wikipedia and I hope, my English abilities may be good enough. Otherwise I have to apologize, and look forward to recieving your support. I hope, the author of the article won´t be too badly dissapointed, because I have reduced several sentences and shortened or removed some passages. I look forward to recieving your comments. Best regards --Lichtreich (talk) 11:39, 26 May 2018 (UTC)