User talk:Lif704/Millie Lawson Bethell Paxton

Prof. D. Feedback
Hi and ! Excited for your article! Some feedback: --Liliput000 (talk) 13:08, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
 * your tone is really solid!
 * create a lead section -- this functions as a mini abstract for the article
 * you need to cite and integrate your sources!! this is super important! I know you have them. Let's discuss if you are running into issues with this though
 * could you make a point of indicating that her later life was in Roanoke VA? otherwise Roanoke comes up a lot but she wasn't born there, so there's a disconnect.
 * Great job with hyperlinks! see if any of the other orgs are possible to link to; if not, if they have a non wikipedia site, you can create a "see also" section and link to them there [WWI, Independent Order of Calanthe... Colored Women's Voting Club... Lincoln Burial Park"
 * She was clearly incredibly important and accomplished. So glad this profile will exist.