User talk:Lif704/Millie Lawson Bethell Paxton/Cassierodrique Peer Review

Peer review: This is a really great wiki page. I learned a lot about Millie Paxton from your work. You all did a really great job of writing neutrally. That came across very well. It was really cool how you had so many linked words so we could learn more context about the institutions Paxton was apart of. Something I would suggest is breaking down the "Early life, education, and career" into separate sections. I realize that there is not a ton of info for these three, but I've noticed that those groupings are usually individual on wikipedia pages. Your references look really good too! Overall, really great job all! Thanks for teaching me about Millie Paxton! -Cassie Rodrique