User talk:Lifelonguu

Contribution to Unitarian Universalism
Why do you think your wording is better that what was there? –Shoaler (talk) 09:48, 26 January 2010 (UTC)

Haven't done much Wiki-editing, but hopefully I'm responding to this appropriately. I made two small changes if I'm remembering correctly, so I'm not sure which one you're talking about. The larger edit was on the sentence regarding the format of the worship service. The phrase that didn't sound good to me was "lightly structured" worship, or something to that effect. My concern was with the word "lightly." As a lay leader and now someone studying to be a UU minister, I know how much time and effort often goes into planning what I would call often (but not always) a very structured worship. Perhaps there was trying to be a contrast made there with more ritually centered "High Church" traditions, but it came across in my reading of it as "thrown together" structure. The other adjustments I made to the sentence were just trying to make it grammatical after removing that phrase, the content should be essentially the same. Lifelonguu (talk) 22:36, 26 January 2010 (UTC)